Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.



 
PortalHomeGallerySearchLatest imagesRegisterLog in
Log in
Username:
Password:
Log in automatically: 
:: I forgot my password
Poll
Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
Overused
winter night Empty33%winter night Empty
 33% [ 1 ]
Underused
winter night Empty67%winter night Empty
 67% [ 2 ]
Total Votes : 3
Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

Latest topics
» Abduction to Elfland: Part 4 (19)
winter night Icon_minitimeAugust 14th 2020, 6:22 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 3 (13-18)
winter night Icon_minitimeAugust 9th 2020, 6:41 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 2 (7-12)
winter night Icon_minitimeJuly 10th 2020, 6:30 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 1 (1-6)
winter night Icon_minitimeJune 10th 2020, 6:33 am by TerishD

» To Know Sweet and Sour - Part Seven (35 - Epi)
winter night Icon_minitimeMay 11th 2020, 6:38 am by TerishD

Top posters
oskar (2320)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
TerishD (1441)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
HYdraMStar (1170)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
Kellycakes (1136)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
Snacker (818)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
Urs (569)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
fleamailman (400)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
Leaka (334)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
JuJu (287)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 
alexandra (198)
winter night Emptywinter night Voting_bar2winter night Empty 

 

 winter night

Go down 
AuthorMessage
oskar

winter night Extrascribbler



Male
Number of posts : 2320
Age : 85
Location : portugal
Current Mood : winter night Th_coo10
Registration date : 2008-08-13

winter night Empty
PostSubject: winter night   winter night Icon_minitimeDecember 3rd 2010, 4:40 am

Winter Night


I sit in darkness
The wood in the hearth burns
Flameā€™s core is blue
And look cold as diamonds
Intense the aroma of rage.

Glowing ember
When night yields to dawn... ash
Quiet as a shadow
Blows like snow in winter breeze
In the forest ravens crow.


Back to top Go down
 
winter night
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» winter art
» winter evening
» winter cold
» winter poem
» Winter's Pain

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: The Verses (Poet's Forum) :: Versification-
Jump to: