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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: winter cold   winter cold Icon_minitimeFebruary 28th 2012, 11:55 am

Winter Cold.

I was going for a walk
when I saw an ice front coming down the lane
I let go of the dog on lead.
Ran home and burnt old poetry books
to keep the cold at bay.
Sagacity went up in flames keeping me warm.
Cold ashes and regrets.
And the dog, with its thick fur and disinterest
in reading, survived in the hollow of an old oak.




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PostSubject: Re: winter cold   winter cold Icon_minitimeFebruary 29th 2012, 2:20 am

I really like this one. I especially like when you use words people don't normally use or see in your work. Sagacity is a great word!

When you talked about burning books I gasped for breath. The horror of such a thought! Then bringing the piece together when you spouted your regret made it great. Thanks for sharing!
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PostSubject: winter cold   winter cold Icon_minitimeFebruary 29th 2012, 1:07 pm

thank you my friend I actually burn wrtitten poems but only my own
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PostSubject: Re: winter cold   winter cold Icon_minitimeMarch 1st 2012, 9:39 pm

Is there some sort of symbolism to burning your work?
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