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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Winged Daughter of Lucifer   Winged Daughter of Lucifer Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 9:08 am

This one was actually published.

Winged daughter of Lucifer
Beauty of the night sky
The flame of my unholy desires
Loveliness is thy name
I’d give my soul to taste you
My body to merely feel your touch

Winged daughter of Lucifer
Answerer of my silent prayers
I have laid within your temples
I have gazed upon your sky
I would never defile your wisdom
I beg of you to grant me my request

Winged daughter of Lucifer
Angel of my secret dreams
I stand before you ready
Judge me as you will
Take me into your confidence
Show me the ways to pleasure you

Winged daughter of Lucifer
Perfection in motion and light
Love of my life and device of my demise
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PostSubject: Re: Winged Daughter of Lucifer   Winged Daughter of Lucifer Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 2:10 pm

This is one of my favorites its smooth in its flow. You can picture the scene playing out in your mind and in the end you are mellow. (At least I am)
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PostSubject: Re: Winged Daughter of Lucifer   Winged Daughter of Lucifer Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 4:49 pm

This is actually one of my favorites as well. It's also one of the few I've written in a mellow mood, maybe that's why that's what came through at the end.
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