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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: black-winged bird   black-winged bird Icon_minitimeMay 6th 2015, 9:05 am

The Black-winged Bird.
A bird with enormous wing span is darkening
the sky over the Middle east and there is much
bloodshed as always when a new nation is born
a good example is Israel it cost the life untold by
the losers, living in camps far from home.
Thousands of young men are finding adventures  
and the order they seek so fervently waving black
flags knowing their nation will win no matter
who many headless corpses it makes take, but that
will be forgotten; we only remember the winner,
the Caliphate, which altered the map of the world
and made it a safe haven for undiluted Islam.


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PostSubject: Re: black-winged bird   black-winged bird Icon_minitimeMay 6th 2015, 10:27 am

Court Case
They found the murder pilot on the slope,
a bit here and there and he was stitched together
there was a court case, he had a devil of
an advocate and nearly escaped, a story of a difficult
childhood, some felt tearful.
Nevertheless, he was found guilty and hanged.
Buried in an unmarked grave, why mum, asked
a child, is there no flower on that grave?
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