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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Daughter of Lilith   Daughter of Lilith Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 9:03 am

Boy, don't come around here looking for a daughter of Lilith
When what you clearly seek is a daughter of Eve

Boy, don't think you can keep a daughter of Lilith in her proper place
You better chain yourself up a daughter of Eve

Boy, don't you fool yourself, you won't be able to control a daughter of Lilith
Nor bully her neither
You'll find a daughter of Eve much easier to tame

Boy, don't you dare try to lay ownership to a daughter of Lilith
If you want to own something go buy yourself a daughter of Eve
I hear they are going cheaper by the day

Boy, don't come around here looking for a daughter of Lilith
When what you clearly seek is a daughter of Eve

Boy, you need to hurry up and recognize I'm a daughter of Lilith not of Eve
And the best that you can hope for is to walk out of here the way you came


Run away in fear, little boy
Run away, run away, run away

I'll cut your soul from your body, little boy
Run away, run away, run away

Haven't you been listening to me, little boy
Run away, run away, run away

You are not a man, little boy
Run away, run away, run away

Don't you know who our father is, little boy
Run away, run away, run away

Very well, little boy

Pretend you are a god, little boy

Pretend you are my equal, little boy

But don't say I didn't warn you, little boy

All kittens have claws, little boy

But some of us have fangs
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PostSubject: Re: Daughter of Lilith   Daughter of Lilith Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 2:24 pm

This one sounds like it should be read in front of an audience in the dark of night. Thrilling and yet so exciting you can't wait for the next line. Scary kudos!
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PostSubject: Re: Daughter of Lilith   Daughter of Lilith Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 4:47 pm

I could dig being in front of an audience.
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