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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: an officer's daughter   an officer's daughter Icon_minitimeMarch 11th 2011, 7:34 pm

An Officer’s Daughter (Lima 1964)

Maria von Stoltenberg’s father had been a SS officer, had a picture of him in her room.
On his cap the dreaded silver skull. But since she was proud of her father and knew
nothing of his past, I made no despairing comments. A strange woman, a round faced
Indian with blond hair, she was pleased of that it made her different and in the line
of work since her father had disappeared, when weird men came looking for him,
she was popular. Maria liked me, said I looked like her father, blue eyes, blond hair
and all that crap. She took a few days off work, I hired a car, we toured the odd
a hill landscape, few trees and no rain had fallen for years. Maria’s dream was to go
to Germany, meet her father’s relatives, and be an officer’s daughter. I knew this
was an impossible dream, but promised to see what I could do when back in Europe.
We corresponded for a time, till my letters came back as return of post. I shall not
know what happened to Maria, but hope she found love her kind heart deserves it.

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