HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Demon Tongue (a poem) July 21st 2008, 9:01 am | |
| Contains some erotic elements.
Demon tongue Forked tongue The tongue of my lover Running all over my body Sliding in Sliding out Exciting Inviting Rapture of the soul Only gods can do it like this Taking it in Screaming it out Your name The face I have always known The name no ones else calls Across worlds Across times You will always come to me Nothing can keep us parted No power, but our desire can possess us We are the start and the finish The beginning and the end The yin and the yang that holds it all together You are my prince My liege My father My life My everything And I am yours | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Demon Tongue (a poem) July 26th 2008, 11:05 am | |
| Just a little eroticism to entice readers into wanting more. Nothing is given away in the end accept the emotion of the writer, you. It reads sensually and smooth. | |
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HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Re: Demon Tongue (a poem) July 26th 2008, 12:16 pm | |
| I just got word last night from the editor that this one along with 'Forever in Love' are going to be included in the Yule issue of Horrotica. ( www.horrortica.com) | |
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Saphira
Number of posts : 124 Age : 35 Location : Münster, Germany Registration date : 2008-07-18
| Subject: Re: Demon Tongue (a poem) July 26th 2008, 3:47 pm | |
| I like erotic elements in poems But i cant write it so i love your poem Thank you that you write this I read this so often ^^ | |
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