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HYdraMStar

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PostSubject: A Poem About a Demon   A Poem About a Demon Icon_minitimeNovember 4th 2008, 1:58 am

A Poem About a Demon
by Hydra M. Star

This is a poem about a demon
Can you not see that that is true?
This is a poem about a demon
He is a lot like me and you
Well, a bit more like me then you
This is a poem about a demon
A demon who stole away my heart
I do not know with it what he plans to do
This is a poem about a demon
I hope that he is true
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem About a Demon   A Poem About a Demon Icon_minitimeNovember 4th 2008, 11:03 pm

This is really sweet... in a creepy kinda way...
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem About a Demon   A Poem About a Demon Icon_minitimeNovember 5th 2008, 4:02 pm

nowhere near as good as your poem about "cannot write long poems anymore". where that one felt fresh and new, this one feels awkward and forced.
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem About a Demon   A Poem About a Demon Icon_minitimeNovember 5th 2008, 7:26 pm

See I personally like this one better then the other, but everyone's different.

The funny thing is you say this one sounds more forced, but I wrote it in a third of the time I spent on the other one. It literally just sort of popped into my head as it reads... go figure.
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem About a Demon   A Poem About a Demon Icon_minitimeNovember 5th 2008, 8:09 pm

HYdraMStar wrote:
See I personally like this one better then the other, but everyone's different.

The funny thing is you say this one sounds more forced, but I wrote it in a third of the time I spent on the other one. It literally just sort of popped into my head as it reads... go figure.

that's really interesting that you should say that, especially since (to me, at least) the other one feels more natural. this one, with really awkward lines like "I do not know with it what he plans to do" ...they give the poem the feeling as if you're trying to make your lines to something they can't or fit somewhere they can't. the other poem feels like it slipped comfortably onto the page...this one, clipped and cut as it is, feels like you took an idea here and a thought there and pulled it all together.
i find it awesomely interesting (a) how wrong i can be about the preparation of the poem and (b) how wrong you can be on the intent.
fascinating.
thanks.
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