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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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AliceInWonderland

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PostSubject: From the girl that let you down   From the girl that let you down Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 7:22 am

You're far more than just a friend
You're the only man I stand
I don't even need to please
To have you looking after me
(you know I never get along on my own)
You helped me far more than I begged you to
And you respect my wish of place for myself
You like my way of being different from you
And the little things of me I don't even love myself
You're the one I believe, saying you love all my mistakes
And I blame myself for not being able
To tell you all this right in front of your very eyes
But to me
You are perfect
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PostSubject: Re: From the girl that let you down   From the girl that let you down Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 5:43 pm

And another wonderful piece. Perfection always lies in the eyes of the beholder, which is far more than just beauty and looks.

Great piece!
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PostSubject: Re: From the girl that let you down   From the girl that let you down Icon_minitimeJuly 21st 2008, 2:32 pm

Very smooth piece, it reads nicely. Perfection is a hard subject to talk about.
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PostSubject: Re: From the girl that let you down   From the girl that let you down Icon_minitimeJuly 22nd 2008, 2:25 pm

Hey Alice Smile
Very nice Poem. Nice that you are here. I hope i see you on loveletters in the next time
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PostSubject: Re: From the girl that let you down   From the girl that let you down Icon_minitimeJuly 28th 2008, 2:02 pm

Thanks for all your nice comments. It encourages me very much to write.
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This one is very nice.

I think we have all felt this way at some point.
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