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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Leaka

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Leaka


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PostSubject: Coffee Girl   Coffee Girl Icon_minitimeOctober 2nd 2008, 2:54 pm

Another really short poem:

Coffee girl I see you
everyday as start the
machines in the morning
Coffee girl you giggle
at me with every word
I say

I don't know why coffee
girl, but you make
me want to stay there
and watch you make
coffee everyday
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PostSubject: Re: Coffee Girl   Coffee Girl Icon_minitimeOctober 2nd 2008, 6:55 pm

Quote :
everyday as start the

you might be needed there, but maybe that's purposeful?

I liked it Smile It made it's point, and was rather cute.
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PostSubject: Re: Coffee Girl   Coffee Girl Icon_minitimeOctober 4th 2008, 9:04 pm

Bick wrote:
Quote :
everyday as start the

you might be needed there, but maybe that's purposeful?

I liked it Smile It made it's point, and was rather cute.

I actually need a you there "everyday as you start the"
Oooopsy!
Cute, how?
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PostSubject: Re: Coffee Girl   Coffee Girl Icon_minitimeOctober 28th 2008, 4:21 am

It is very short, cute and flirty, you should expand on this one, make it longer but don't force it.
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