HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: I Love You He Said January 12th 2009, 4:25 am | |
| "I Love You," He Said by Hydra M. Star
Someone told me today, “I love you.”
I replied, “Wait! I’ve heard this one before I can’t remember Exactly how it goes But as I recall The joke was on me.”
Last edited by HYdraMStar on January 12th 2009, 2:54 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : edited per John's suggestion.) | |
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John Yamrus
Number of posts : 129 Registration date : 2008-09-04
| Subject: Re: I Love You He Said January 12th 2009, 9:05 am | |
| a small suggestion, if i may...i'd change "joke" to "one" and "punchline" to "joke. try it. john | |
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HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Re: I Love You He Said January 12th 2009, 2:55 pm | |
| Yeah, John, that does work a bit better.
Thanks for the input. | |
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