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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: I Love You He Said   I Love You He Said Icon_minitimeJanuary 12th 2009, 4:25 am

"I Love You," He Said
by Hydra M. Star

Someone told me today,
“I love you.”

I replied,
“Wait!
I’ve heard this one before
I can’t remember
Exactly how it goes
But as I recall
The joke was on me.”


Last edited by HYdraMStar on January 12th 2009, 2:54 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : edited per John's suggestion.)
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PostSubject: Re: I Love You He Said   I Love You He Said Icon_minitimeJanuary 12th 2009, 9:05 am

a small suggestion, if i may...i'd change "joke" to "one" and "punchline" to "joke.
try it.
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PostSubject: Re: I Love You He Said   I Love You He Said Icon_minitimeJanuary 12th 2009, 2:55 pm

Yeah, John, that does work a bit better.

Thanks for the input.
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