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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
Overused
33%
[ 1 ]
Underused
67%
[ 2 ]
Total Votes : 3
Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;
The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?
Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.
Look Back
When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.
One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.
Number of posts : 2320 Age : 85 Location : portugal Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-08-13
Subject: love December 14th 2009, 11:30 am
Love. The joy of first love can’t be copied, but man tries and tries to repeat this experience, and on his way causes much unhappiness for his craving of love’s impossibility. This last till he gets old and settles for simple friendship
Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
Subject: Re: love December 14th 2009, 4:52 pm
I like it, short and sweet. The last lines use of the word 'settle' seems a bit harsh, but that is only my opinion. Nice writing, keep it up.
Urs
Number of posts : 569 Location : Corner of Insane Ave & Stupid St. in the State of Denial Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-09-23
Subject: Re: love December 17th 2009, 12:52 am
I am going to agree with Kelly. Short, simple and to the point.
I found it to be one of the best pomes you have put up.