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HYdraMStar

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PostSubject: Cosmic Father and Mother   Cosmic Father and Mother Icon_minitimeJanuary 11th 2009, 5:12 am
I wrote and posted this one up on my blog a couple of days ago, early one morning when I had a recent conversation with a really good friend on my mind. It's like a lot of the other stuff I've done lately and is related to the characters and plot line of my book, but I really like it. I might even include it somehow with the book.


Cosmic Father and Mother
by Hydra M. Star

I am protected by the brawn
and the strength of our infernal father
and blessed by the love
and the grace of our infernal mother.

Together they are the divine pairing
all mankind tries to simulate
and recreate.

I am no different
in this aspect from the rest.

I am their child
and I am no different
in this aspect from the rest.

Only, I
and a hand full of others
recognize the gift of themselves
they have given
and we do not spoil it.

We do not taint them with false adoration
or fake words of worship
or cover up their nakedness and lust
until they are sterile and pure.

We merely accept them
as they are
into our hearts
and into our souls
and we carry on with our business
of procreation and civilization.

That is after all what they want for us
and what is their purpose in us
and what is mankind’s true higher calling.
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PostSubject: Re: Cosmic Father and Mother   Cosmic Father and Mother Icon_minitimeJanuary 11th 2009, 10:15 am
HYdraMStar wrote:
I wrote and posted this one up on my blog a couple of days ago, early one morning when I had a recent conversation with a really good friend on my mind. It's like a lot of the other stuff I've done lately and is related to the characters and plot line of my book, but I really like it. I might even include it somehow with the book.

I think that would be a great idea to incorporate this into your existing work. I like that idea. The fact that you can write poetry is also a testament to your diversity.


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Cosmic Father and Mother
by Hydra M. Star

I am protected by the brawn
and the strength of our infernal father
and blessed by the love
and the grace of our infernal mother.

Together they are the divine pairing
all mankind tries to simulate
and recreate.

I am no different
in this aspect from the rest.

I am their child
and I am no different
in this aspect from the rest.

Only, I
and a hand full of others
recognize the gift of themselves
they have given
and we do not spoil it.

We do not taint them with false adoration
or fake words of worship
or cover up their nakedness and lust
until they are sterile and pure.

We merely accept them
as they are
into our hearts
and into our souls
and we carry on with our business
of procreation and civilization.

That is after all what they want for us
and what is their purpose in us
and what is mankind’s true higher calling.

The part in blue seems to throw off the pace of the poem, is the redundancy meant to be there, like this being a lyrical piece as opposed to a poem?


Last edited by Urs on January 11th 2009, 10:16 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Stupid me - all quotes are in red.)
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