Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.



 
PortalHomeGallerySearchLatest imagesRegisterLog in
Log in
Username:
Password:
Log in automatically: 
:: I forgot my password
Poll
Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
Overused
Sundae Treat Empty33%Sundae Treat Empty
 33% [ 1 ]
Underused
Sundae Treat Empty67%Sundae Treat Empty
 67% [ 2 ]
Total Votes : 3
Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?
Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

Latest topics
» Abduction to Elfland: Part 4 (19)
Sundae Treat Icon_minitimeAugust 14th 2020, 6:22 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 3 (13-18)
Sundae Treat Icon_minitimeAugust 9th 2020, 6:41 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 2 (7-12)
Sundae Treat Icon_minitimeJuly 10th 2020, 6:30 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 1 (1-6)
Sundae Treat Icon_minitimeJune 10th 2020, 6:33 am by TerishD

» To Know Sweet and Sour - Part Seven (35 - Epi)
Sundae Treat Icon_minitimeMay 11th 2020, 6:38 am by TerishD

Top posters
oskar (2320)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
TerishD (1441)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
HYdraMStar (1170)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
Kellycakes (1136)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
Snacker (818)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
Urs (569)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
fleamailman (400)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
Leaka (334)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
JuJu (287)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 
alexandra (198)
Sundae Treat EmptySundae Treat Voting_bar2Sundae Treat Empty 

 :: The Lyrics (Songwriting Forum) :: Lyrical Scriptures
 

 Sundae Treat

Go down 
3 posters
AuthorMessage
Kellycakes

Sundae Treat ScribblesQueen-1
Kellycakes


Female
Number of posts : 1136
Age : 46
Location : State of Thankfulness!
Current Mood : Sundae Treat Th_wel10
Registration date : 2008-07-17

Sundae Treat Empty
PostSubject: Sundae Treat   Sundae Treat Icon_minitimeSeptember 5th 2008, 4:37 pm
V1

How about some whip cream baby
Pineapple rings and a cherry
Love is in the sundae, someday
I want to share my sundae with you (yes I do)
I can cream you for the thrill
Make your body tingle, your heart skip a beat
You know I can, you know I will
I can do things to you with just a kiss
Wrap your legs around me, tickle me with your feet
I have all the right ingredients

C1

Have a taste of my sundae all sticky sweet
With you , only with you
I’ll share my sundae treat
I know you, you can taste it too
I want to share my sundae, someday with you
How about some whip cream baby
Pineapple rings and a cherry
Love is in the sundae, someday
I want to share my sundae with you (yes baby I do)

V2

Do you trust me enough to close your eyes
Let me do what I will, it’s all a surprise
Hand cuffs, whips and chains, are never a game
No switching between pleasure and pain
This is a passionate sundae thang
Let’s make bittersweet memories
Maybe some sticky sweet fantasies
Either way would be ok
I want to share my sundae with you

C2

Have a taste of my sundae all sticky sweet
With you , only with you
I’ll share my sundae treat
I know you, you can taste it too
I want to share my sundae, someday with you
How about some whip cream baby
Pineapple rings and a cherry
Love is in the sundae, someday
I want to share my sundae
Melt in your mouth, all sticky sweet
Someday I’ll share my sundae with you
Back to top Go down
https://scribbles.forumotion.com
JuJu

Sundae Treat ScribblesPrincess-1
JuJu


Female
Number of posts : 287
Age : 51
Location : Sedona, Arizona
Current Mood : Sundae Treat Th_alo10
Registration date : 2008-07-18

Sundae Treat Empty
PostSubject: Re: Sundae Treat   Sundae Treat Icon_minitimeSeptember 5th 2008, 4:48 pm
I love this song when you made it years ago sis .....I'm glad you find it.....
Back to top Go down
Snacker

Sundae Treat ScribblesKing-3
Snacker


Male
Number of posts : 818
Age : 39
Location : Stuck in Michigan
Current Mood : Sundae Treat Caring10
Registration date : 2008-07-17

Sundae Treat Empty
PostSubject: Re: Sundae Treat   Sundae Treat Icon_minitimeSeptember 6th 2008, 2:49 am
You used simply words, but you managed to put them into the right place. Very nicely written. Two thumbs up!
Back to top Go down
http://www.scribbles.forumotion.com
Sponsored content





Sundae Treat Empty
PostSubject: Re: Sundae Treat   Sundae Treat Icon_minitime
Back to top Go down
 
Sundae Treat
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Sweet Treat

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: The Lyrics (Songwriting Forum) :: Lyrical Scriptures-
Jump to: