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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Sweet Treat   Sweet Treat Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 10:06 pm

A sweetness, soft and pure

Lingering in my mind

Tasting like a heartfelt cure

What a awesome find!

It's wet, wild and full of surprises

More then just a sweet

It's warmth will cluster you senses

A succulent treat!

With a drizzle of honey

Lets not forget the whipped cream

A few flicks of the tongue baby

And watch how your skin will gleam!

Breathing in the scented oils

Making love by a candles glow

Our bodies begin to boil

As orgasm after orgasm flows!
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PostSubject: Re: Sweet Treat   Sweet Treat Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 10:17 pm

Great choice of words which let you feel the passion in the piece.
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