Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.



 
PortalHomeGallerySearchLatest imagesRegisterLog in
Log in
Username:
Password:
Log in automatically: 
:: I forgot my password
Poll
Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
Overused
world war two Empty33%world war two Empty
 33% [ 1 ]
Underused
world war two Empty67%world war two Empty
 67% [ 2 ]
Total Votes : 3
Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

Latest topics
» Abduction to Elfland: Part 4 (19)
world war two Icon_minitimeAugust 14th 2020, 6:22 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 3 (13-18)
world war two Icon_minitimeAugust 9th 2020, 6:41 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 2 (7-12)
world war two Icon_minitimeJuly 10th 2020, 6:30 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 1 (1-6)
world war two Icon_minitimeJune 10th 2020, 6:33 am by TerishD

» To Know Sweet and Sour - Part Seven (35 - Epi)
world war two Icon_minitimeMay 11th 2020, 6:38 am by TerishD

Top posters
oskar (2320)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
TerishD (1441)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
HYdraMStar (1170)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
Kellycakes (1136)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
Snacker (818)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
Urs (569)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
fleamailman (400)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
Leaka (334)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
JuJu (287)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 
alexandra (198)
world war two Emptyworld war two Voting_bar2world war two Empty 

 

 world war two

Go down 
AuthorMessage
oskar

world war two Extrascribbler



Male
Number of posts : 2320
Age : 85
Location : portugal
Current Mood : world war two Th_coo10
Registration date : 2008-08-13

world war two Empty
PostSubject: world war two   world war two Icon_minitimeNovember 22nd 2011, 7:32 am

A Child’s War .world war two

Pleasing sound
Of soft falling rain
Absent wind
Peace on earth
I think of my dear mother
Lullabies she sang.

On night sky
Bombers sought targets
Broken glass
Smell of fire
A frightened baby cried
Lullabies she sang.
Back to top Go down
 
world war two
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» let the world see
» world war 3
» The World...
» it is a woman´s world
» world news

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: The Verses (Poet's Forum) :: Versification-
Jump to: