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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Saphira

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Number of posts : 124
Age : 35
Location : Münster, Germany
Registration date : 2008-07-18

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PostSubject: The World...   The World... Icon_minitimeJuly 23rd 2008, 10:33 am

In reality
the world is black...

So many homeless people
with no future
and a little bag

In Africa
the kids are so hungry
have no mother
or everyone other

In Asia
the little girls must work
so that they can buy
a little piece of pork

Every day we see
these pictures
we see it so often
they don't shock us anymore

Be happy
to live so good
and have parents
on your side

We aren't happy
because
we want more and more

Grandma's
give us money
and think we are honey

I will never say again
my "stupid life"

We have it so good...
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PostSubject: Re: The World...   The World... Icon_minitimeJuly 24th 2008, 5:49 pm

I think you did an excellent job of translating this. The world is a dreadful place, hell on earth. I enjoyed this one a lot.
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Saphira

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Number of posts : 124
Age : 35
Location : Münster, Germany
Registration date : 2008-07-18

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PostSubject: Re: The World...   The World... Icon_minitimeJuly 24th 2008, 5:53 pm

Oh really ? Is the translate okay ? Cool
I write this without any help
I wrote this in the car. xD

And thank you very much Kelly Very Happy
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