HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Soul Gazing (a poem) July 21st 2008, 9:00 am | |
| I sit here gazing out upon the land Gazing at the passing hours Pondering where you are When will you arrive With whom will you come What thoughts do you have of me I know that you think of me I know that for certain As certain as the sky is gray when it rains I can feel your thoughts moving over me Like hands caressing my flesh Like teeth biting at my neck So gentle So rough So close to enough | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Soul Gazing (a poem) July 22nd 2008, 8:54 pm | |
| I like it, although I'm not sure I understand the last sentence.
'So close to enough' are you saying that you've had enough of this daydream or enough of the 'connection' you once share with the other person? | |
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HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Re: Soul Gazing (a poem) July 22nd 2008, 9:00 pm | |
| No, it's meant to mean that the impression of feeling the departed lover's thoughts is nearly enough to fulfill the desire. | |
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