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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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VergilSparda

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PostSubject: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 28th 2008, 10:37 pm

I haven't you a poem today.
so I give you this one instead:

Your soul is lain up here with me.
Your corpse lay down there to decay.
Your mnd must crush you what your heart dost say.
"Beg for death you decayed mess!"
The scream comes up from Hell.

"I tell you no! You're filthy! No! You scumbag dressed in red!"
With all you have you stand.
You're drenched in mud and sweat.
Misery's your word today.
There's nothing best explained.
Drag your thoughts to holes outside,
Burry them for someone's find.'

I bid ado to all of your.
My emotionless poemless hates.
Learn a lesson 'day think 'bout it hard.
I won't be here 'morrow just to watch you all mourn.


Hey, the description said all poems accepted.

I was brave.
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PostSubject: Re: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 28th 2008, 11:01 pm

It certainly isn't lacking in passion.

I like it.
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PostSubject: Re: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 28th 2008, 11:13 pm

Thank you.

I wrote it in a car when I was pretty angry at the lack of sun...which I would have hated anyway, but it was better than the grey skyed rain that I was getting.

Grey skies give me migraines. So I wrote this.

At the angry grey sky.
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PostSubject: Re: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 28th 2008, 11:17 pm

Gray skies and sun shine both piss you off... You are my kind of girl. Twisted Evil
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PostSubject: Re: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 28th 2008, 11:24 pm

Twisted Evil Awesome, but the sun would keep me from sleep, and the grey was giving me a headache. I think I like sundown best. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 29th 2008, 2:33 pm

Oh my, well I'm not sure I could give you any constructive criticism on the form of this piece because there isn't any.

Its a chaotic rambling, which is always great! I agree with Hydra there is quite a voice present, be it a bit scary. Either way, keep writing...
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PostSubject: Re: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 29th 2008, 3:58 pm

I am afraid of you both Oo
no joke Very Happy
I find it nice
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PostSubject: Re: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 30th 2008, 6:14 am

Very original, I enjoyed it. The only problem is that your words don't seem to flow very well.
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PostSubject: Re: You Arsonist...Your Soul.   You Arsonist...Your Soul. Icon_minitimeJuly 31st 2008, 7:40 pm

I figured my words didn't flow, but I thought I would have posted it anyway, it had a certain devilish ring to it that I liked, and that the rain just kind of triggered.

It was interesting, and thanks all Wink
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