HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Not Another Love Poem (an anti-poem) July 21st 2008, 8:59 am | |
| Not another love poem I cannot take another The sentiment is making me sick The clichés are making me hurl I cannot take another love poem Your heart is not melting It was never made of ice Your life is not complete If it were you would be deceased No one is impressed You really should be ashamed | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Not Another Love Poem (an anti-poem) July 22nd 2008, 9:06 pm | |
| Sounds like what your title says, 'an anti-poem'. Very nicely written. It shows your feelings about love poems very well. | |
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