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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Under the Moon   Under the Moon Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 9:37 pm

Under here is where my heart lies

In your arms we sigh through fire

Long fingers tracing uneven hips

Lips dancing in lovers bliss

A whisper

"I want you"

Never been so clear

Without words

Clothes disappear

Bodies mingle shadowed by trees

Wind not the only thing blowing

Breath is shallow and warm

Hearts are racing and torn

A gasp

"Yes baby more"

Never been so clear

Without words

Daylight disappear

Back's arched and toes curled

Hanging on for more and more

The moon peeking

Skin wet with a lovers dew

Silence

"I know what you want"

Scratches, licks and moans

Damn time really flies

Under here is where my heart lies
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PostSubject: Re: Under the Moon   Under the Moon Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 10:18 pm

I enjoyed reading the piece, but maybe it would help and flow better if you would break it in single verses?
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