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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: moon beam   moon beam Icon_minitimeFebruary 26th 2015, 5:32 am

There was a moonbeam it was a little different from other
beams as it sought out sleeping girls.
He loved them mainly those aged 7 to 8 years old it was
innocence about them, he found rapt.
Once a girl woke up and saw him sitting on the sill it was
a cold night and she invited him to bed, soon he fell asleep
and then it was morning the Moon was no longer there,
sunlight would zap him, no mercy calling him a paedophile,
like they should be so innocent when caressing young skin.
He hid under the bed until nightfall, after kissing the little girl’s
chaste lips flew back to the moon, but he was no longer free
to fly alone and visit little girls

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