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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Time Machine   Time Machine Icon_minitimeJanuary 25th 2015, 7:29 am

Time Machine

Sat on a tree trunk
Looked at my muddy boots
Incredible day
An electric shock of happiness
My gist is sharp as before
I see the splendour
Fine rain is as cooling silk
I will not leave now
But if the stop-clock tells time
Not regret a life well lived
Sail-ship’s tarpaulin
Voyaging the blue expanse
Timeless legionnaires
Sand dune coloured castles
And the last shot has been fired
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