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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: washng machine   washng machine Icon_minitimeDecember 15th 2014, 6:32 am

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There was a time I always went home, by road rail, flight or by bus
I always got there and still do. Even though when I get there I want
to leave. The house shrinks every year sibling’s gone mother too,
she never looked up from the romantic novel she was reading to say
halloo. 1953, it was summer, well there are summers every year,
some are warm, some not. I was home from the sea and had bought
mother a washing machine and we were the only ones in the street that
had one it was a warm summer, open windows, cold beer and laughter.
Then for a reason I could not fathom a silence fell, the sky was grey and
nothing was the same again; it was only me who kept returning home.
The washing machine I bought in 1953 is still in the basement rusty and
dusty, but it had for a short time brought happiness and an end to
stifling poverty after the war ended, when factories stood still and it
was hard to be working class.
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