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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Delta Blue

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PostSubject: Time   Time Icon_minitimeSeptember 6th 2008, 1:54 pm

Time

The cycle, the circle,
She always runs true
No matter the problems
That man might construe

Unheeded she deftly
Disposes of dreams
Bears witness in silence
To all of our schemes

And just like a river
Whose current runs deep
She flows on forever
Never pausing to sleep

To her we are fleeting
So brief is our flight
For we are but moments
That occur in her sight

She's the ending, beginning
Each moment reborn
The sunrise and sunset
Eternal in form

She's the cycle the circle
She always runs true
Best do unto her
Before she does unto you

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PostSubject: Reply   Time Icon_minitimeSeptember 6th 2008, 2:14 pm

ALL RIGHT! This is the type of poetry that I prefer. Good ryhmes. Good rhythm. Solid message. Of course, I recognize that the contemporary poets consider these types of poems stale, but I would rather read them.

Thanks. Enjoyed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Time   Time Icon_minitimeSeptember 6th 2008, 3:16 pm

as much as i'd prefer a sharp stick in the eye to reading modern rhymes, i have to say that this is a fine example of using the form and using it to YOUR own advantage. you didn't let the form rule you. there's no forced lines here (several hackneyed phrases, but that's besides the point)...smooth. clean. nice. people who are interested in writing rhymed verse should print this one out and tack it to their wall.
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PostSubject: Re: Time   Time Icon_minitimeSeptember 6th 2008, 4:41 pm

Very nicely written. Like the gentlemen above me said, great rhymes and rhythm!
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PostSubject: Re: Time   Time Icon_minitimeSeptember 10th 2008, 2:11 am

Very nice, there isn't anything I could say to make this better. You wrote it fantastically and it reads smoothly, all around beautiful write.
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