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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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White as snow is the flesh of the apple
Over rose colored lips
Delivered to sharp cutting teeth
Excited is the tongue that taste thy
Jealous saliva fills up the mouth
In a move of grace down the throat it slides
Belly with it is satisfied
With a sigh the body calls for rest
The brain is content to comply
Death has come for dinner
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Maybe I'm reading more into this then necessary, you really know how to mind fuck someone. Apple as the last supper!
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I think it take some of the edge off of it, but this one was inspired by Disney's Snow White.
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Yeah you are right, I love snowhite and your poem Smile
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