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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: house of discontent   house of discontent Icon_minitimeDecember 21st 2009, 7:45 am

The house of Discontent

In the yard a cat snoozes in the new sun,
while an old woman, sweeps cigarette butts
off the dance floor. In hot, perfumed rooms,
men are dressing avoid looking at sleeping
women and crumbled sheets. On lips the taste
of defeat, reeking of yesterday's booze and in
tired eyes the bile of unhappy love ominously
glint, there will be violence soon. The utter
loneliness of paid for sex, nothing can be as
pathetic as the sight of men seeking embrace
of love at a house of sadness.
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