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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Forgotten...my first post!!!   Forgotten...my first post!!! Icon_minitimeMarch 2nd 2009, 10:44 am

Hope you like it! (its a little depressing i guess)

FORGOTTEN
Like a single flame'
gone
with a simple breath

Like a thread of hope'
destroyed
by a little test

Like a ray of sunlight'
covered
by a pregnant cloud

Like a little child,
dissapearing
in a humongous crowd

Like a faint smile,
wiped off
by depressing news

Like a confident man,
shy,
because of peoples veiws

Like a butterfly,
dead,
with the slightest crush

Like a tissue,
Vanished
with the mildest flush

Like a happy girl,
sober
because of a tiny change

Like a human,
forgotten
Once in the grave...
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PostSubject: Re: Forgotten...my first post!!!   Forgotten...my first post!!! Icon_minitimeMarch 2nd 2009, 10:49 am

I enjoyed reading your work a lot. It has a great flow to it, and also when there is a touch of depression behind it, I think it is a great piece of art. Very nicely written!

Btw...welcome to Scribbles. You may want to introduce yourself in the 'Scribbles Appendages" section, so we all can get to know you.
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Nice, I really liked the "pregnant cloud" line.
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PostSubject: Re: Forgotten...my first post!!!   Forgotten...my first post!!! Icon_minitimeMarch 3rd 2009, 4:01 pm

the goblin always knew that poetry looks easy to someone reading it, while only someone who wrote poetry could understand just how hard it is at times to get it right then, saying "...bravo SAJ, it is very good, and I am looking forward to seeing more then..."
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PostSubject: Re: Forgotten...my first post!!!   Forgotten...my first post!!! Icon_minitimeMarch 3rd 2009, 5:58 pm

I must agree with everyone here, it was a really nice read. There are some depressing lines in it; however the overall feel of the piece isn't really depressing as it is life. Well written I'd say.

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