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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: System Check[Explicity Language]   System Check[Explicity Language] Icon_minitimeFebruary 5th 2009, 3:17 pm

The usual metal song from me.

System Check

You never understood
You never listened
Why are you such a f#$king b!tch?
You never put my condition first
You never gave me special treatment
But all of your other silly little friends
and do the same sh!t I do and it's new for
you


^chorus^
You're a b!tch
You're a F@#ker
Get you f@#king system checked
^chorus end^

Despite all that I say
I don't want waste my anger
on you, despite all the hate
I don't want waste my time
with you
It's true, it's true I hate you
I don't wanna ever talk to you
again

^chorus repeat^
^chorus end^

It's true, yes so true
That I wanted to become
your friend I wanted to
be in the click
I wanted to be able to
be someone in the eyes
of you
but I can't do what you want
me to because you never accepted
what I did...unless I was already one your
friends

^chorus repeat^
^chorus end^
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