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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Love Disease   Love Disease Icon_minitimeJanuary 11th 2009, 11:48 am

Love Disease
by Hydra M. Star

I fear love
It’s like a plague
It’s catching
It’s like a brain fever
It sends you right out of your senses
They don’t make a pill for it
But if they did it would be bitter
It would be jagged and jaded and soft in the middle
How many would you have to swallow, do you think?
Certainly not just one
No one would be cured after just one
You would have to take many
Many pills over the course of years
Forget them just once and you got the disease
Let one get past you and you got the disease
It’s frightening
I'm frightened
Aren’t you frightened as well?
No?
You must have the disease
Excuse me while I put on my hazmat suit, please


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PostSubject: Re: Love Disease   Love Disease Icon_minitimeJanuary 11th 2009, 1:18 pm

this is probably the best thing you've posted.
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PostSubject: Re: Love Disease   Love Disease Icon_minitimeJanuary 12th 2009, 9:09 am

Wow, that was awesome XD

the part about the pill would have to be my favorite XD

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It sends you right out of your senses
They don’t make a pill for it
But if they did it would be bitter
It would be jagged and jaded and soft in the middle
How many would you have to swallow, do you think

i dunno much a bout poetry, but i like this XD
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PostSubject: Re: Love Disease   Love Disease Icon_minitimeJanuary 12th 2009, 2:59 pm

Thanks a lot you guys.
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