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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Your Memory In Me   Your Memory In Me Icon_minitimeDecember 21st 2008, 4:52 am

Your Memory In Me
By Hydra M. Star


I loved you
I lost you
So, why won’t you go away?

I turn around
And you are there
I move forward
And you are there
You are always there
Just as you promised

I never guessed
After all that happened
You’d be so true to your word

I never guessed
After all that happened
You’d still be effecting me

It is such foolishness
A word from you
A glance
A telephone call
Can unravel me so completely

I loved you
I lost you
And now I must kill you
Or at least your memory in me
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PostSubject: Re: Your Memory In Me   Your Memory In Me Icon_minitimeDecember 21st 2008, 11:33 am

Strangely haunting and touching at the same tine.

Well done.
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PostSubject: Re: Your Memory In Me   Your Memory In Me Icon_minitimeJanuary 4th 2009, 1:39 am

I like it. Just like Urs said it is haunting, but you can clearly read out of it the way you feel.

Nice work.
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PostSubject: Re: Your Memory In Me   Your Memory In Me Icon_minitimeJanuary 4th 2009, 1:41 am

I agree with Urs. It seems like you are battling demons, do you really think they will ever go away? Loved ones are likely to stay with you forever. Love the title and how you incorporated into your piece. Nice job!
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PostSubject: Re: Your Memory In Me   Your Memory In Me Icon_minitimeJanuary 4th 2009, 2:58 pm

I'm glad you guys liked it and as always thanks for commenting.

And to answer your question, Kelly, I think sometimes it is a matter of rather or not we are ready to let go and I'll be the first to admit that in some cases I'm not ready to let things go, yet... but one day, maybe soon, I will be.
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PostSubject: Re: Your Memory In Me   Your Memory In Me Icon_minitimeJanuary 4th 2009, 6:03 pm

Love the new image, BTW.
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PostSubject: Re: Your Memory In Me   Your Memory In Me Icon_minitimeJanuary 5th 2009, 12:11 am

Urs wrote:
Love the new image, BTW.

Yep, new hair color and new image to kick off the new year.
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