HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Your Memory In Me December 21st 2008, 4:52 am | |
| Your Memory In Me By Hydra M. Star
I loved you I lost you So, why won’t you go away?
I turn around And you are there I move forward And you are there You are always there Just as you promised
I never guessed After all that happened You’d be so true to your word
I never guessed After all that happened You’d still be effecting me
It is such foolishness A word from you A glance A telephone call Can unravel me so completely
I loved you I lost you And now I must kill you Or at least your memory in me | |
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Urs
Number of posts : 569 Location : Corner of Insane Ave & Stupid St. in the State of Denial Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-09-23
| Subject: Re: Your Memory In Me December 21st 2008, 11:33 am | |
| Strangely haunting and touching at the same tine.
Well done. | |
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Snacker
Number of posts : 818 Age : 39 Location : Stuck in Michigan Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Your Memory In Me January 4th 2009, 1:39 am | |
| I like it. Just like Urs said it is haunting, but you can clearly read out of it the way you feel.
Nice work. | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Your Memory In Me January 4th 2009, 1:41 am | |
| I agree with Urs. It seems like you are battling demons, do you really think they will ever go away? Loved ones are likely to stay with you forever. Love the title and how you incorporated into your piece. Nice job! | |
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HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Re: Your Memory In Me January 4th 2009, 2:58 pm | |
| I'm glad you guys liked it and as always thanks for commenting.
And to answer your question, Kelly, I think sometimes it is a matter of rather or not we are ready to let go and I'll be the first to admit that in some cases I'm not ready to let things go, yet... but one day, maybe soon, I will be. | |
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Urs
Number of posts : 569 Location : Corner of Insane Ave & Stupid St. in the State of Denial Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-09-23
| Subject: Re: Your Memory In Me January 4th 2009, 6:03 pm | |
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HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Re: Your Memory In Me January 5th 2009, 12:11 am | |
| - Urs wrote:
- Love the new image, BTW.
Yep, new hair color and new image to kick off the new year. | |
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