HYdraMStar
Number of posts : 1170 Age : 45 Location : Charlotte, NC Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-20
| Subject: Little Berries November 5th 2008, 7:21 pm | |
| Little Berriesby Hydra M. Star Tiny little berries Growing on a tree I ask myself repeatedly How poisonous are thy? I take one I take two I plop them in my mouth The taste is divine But oh dear Oh my It seems I fear That I might be Going blind | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Little Berries November 10th 2008, 2:45 am | |
| Lovely. I love pieces that include pictures! The readers gets a better view from the writers point of view. Short and very well written. | |
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