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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Little Berries   Little Berries Icon_minitimeNovember 5th 2008, 7:21 pm

Little Berries
by Hydra M. Star

Tiny little berries
Growing on a tree
I ask myself repeatedly
How poisonous are thy?
I take one
I take two
I plop them in my mouth
The taste is divine
But oh dear
Oh my
It seems
I fear
That I might be
Going blind

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PostSubject: Re: Little Berries   Little Berries Icon_minitimeNovember 10th 2008, 2:45 am

Lovely. I love pieces that include pictures! The readers gets a better view from the writers point of view. Short and very well written.
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