well, at the very least it sounds like you had a plan...that's certainly more than most people have. that's great that you went into the piece with a goal and had thought about how you were going to reach that goal. that's great. i don't think you totally reached that point as your reader (me) missed the point. now, that may merely be a sign of my enduring ignorance and approaching senility, so i may be wrong in my assessment.
once again, the mere fact that you had thought about what you wanted to write and how you wanted to comminicate those thoughts, puts you well ahead of the crowd.
best...
yamrus