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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: high Frinance   high Frinance Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2016, 5:34 am

High Finance
I was staring at a blank screen when the cleaner came
She was late and told me why
I didn`t want to know about her grandchildren and who
Have no work yet have good education
I have many news channels they talk about trade it is as
They live in a bubble that has no sharp corners they wear
Suits and hug each other while talking about trade
 
I saw a movie where the protagonist said “politicians use
Women as props but they prefer to fuck each other.”
Beautiful rust coloured earth in your hands, flowers and
The bee that keeps nature humming is not trade or high
Finance, I wish the men in suits will look up go outside inhale,
The day even in the rain does not sit in a restaurant dining

Food paid for by us who think life is more than trade.
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