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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: the loving feeling   the loving feeling Icon_minitimeApril 18th 2015, 5:40 am

The Loving Feeling
This is page 99 the way my wife and I sleep
and during the night when I half wake up pat
her side of the duvet to be sure that I’m not
reduced to a lonely 9.

There times when she can’t hear my breaths
she shakes me and ask me a daft question and
I know why, it is good to be loved, she to dislike
the idea of waking up alone in a bedroom.

We do bicker during the day, she doesn’t like me
driving around in my scooter, I think she spends
too much time doing housework and re- arranging
which makes me fall on a strange object in the night?

Love is at time irritating we worried too much about
the one we love and I get annoyed if she badgers me,
but come bedtime we are friends again and hope we
both will be there in the morning
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