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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: full house   full house Icon_minitimeFebruary 10th 2015, 6:38 am

Full House.
The little house in the poor part of the town
walls looking ready to burst .
when the newlyweds long time ago it was small
for them and they spoke of getting another one.
Time was hard and one child after another
was born, eight in all.
-The long ago newlywed- joked they had to
wait to get the house back when
the children became adult and could find their
own place to live; it took time
and finally they were alone, but not at peace,
the whole quarter of rickety houses was
being erased like removing memories of hard times,
and the bulldozers came.
The couple got a small flat in a high rise building
and with their children moving in or out
according to their bad luck in life,
the small flat was soon full of bickering adult children.

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