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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: A Long Way to Go   A Long Way to Go Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 3:57 am

I'm walking on a street, a quiet street
Around me the desert
It's a very hot day
And the air is dry

I'm walking there just with my backpack
Inside a bottle of water and a picture of you
The water that I don't die with thirst
And the picture to save energy

I don't know where I am
But my love to you leads me
I don't know when I am with you
And I don't know how many miles I still have to go

The only thing I know
Is when I'm there you will be ready for me
You will give me your whole heart
And in the meantime I will wait

I will walk slowly
That I'm not to early with you
Cause I give you time
Never mind how long it goes

I will be there
When you need me
And I will be there
When you want me

The other thing I don't want
Is to corner you
And I know you will give me your whole heart
When the time is ripe

And when the time is ripe
You will be mine
Forever you
Forever me
Forever us
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