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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Black Ghettoes   Black Ghettoes Icon_minitimeNovember 27th 2014, 9:26 am

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So now they are burning down small shop
they use daily use in rightful anger.
The police are mostly white in a black neighbourhood
which does not goes down well
Bloody guns you may say, but everyone is armed.
But my thought was of the poor black people which
now have to go a long way to shop, since it appears
they burnt down their own cars too.
It seems to me Afro-Americans have sunk into
a hole of delayed slavery depression, and struggle to
get up and fight back, not with guns, but education.
Black young man with pistol wants the good things
in life, but only find early death or a prison cell.
Pandering to this we must not, there is a limit
even for grave historical injustices, it is time to break
the chains of the past and be free men again.
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