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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Iddylic Road   Iddylic Road Icon_minitimeSeptember 12th 2014, 3:43 pm

The Idyllic Road

There is on the plain that looks like an African Savannah
in hazy summer morning, a road, where the hills begins,
that is flanked by cork trees and appears like an avenue
where royalty ought to drive through when receiving our
adulation; also, not to forget, the sight splendid uniforms
ladies hats and snapping flags in a fairytale breeze,
I also wanted to see if the grapes on the vines had been
harvested, and if not why the delay?

Yes, the grapes had been picked which pleased me and
leaves on the vines are turning sepia. A season is over.
I took a few photos of the cork tree road and said my
farewell I will not be back here before spring. I know of
a place where a lake appears in winters I´ll go there sit on
my bike and hope to see a fresh water mermaid.

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