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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: the voice of the future   the voice of the future Icon_minitimeAugust 17th 2014, 7:36 am

The Voice of the future

In the night the easterly wind picked up
windows and doors rattled
I was greatly worried a new voice from
The Middle East – an Arab voice- was loud
forceful, clear and menacing.
For too long had the people been corrupted
by western influences saying one thing while
practising the opposite.
The voice was harsh an uncompromising
void of charity and tolerated no objection,
the voice of those who had been oppressed too
long and forced to nurture a voracious crow,
a colonial outpost of European misfits,
a cancer on the Arabic soul.
A, time speak to me is it not at this moment right
for western powers to leave and let the game
plays itself out and let blood run into the sand?
In the backyard dervishes of dust danced faster and
Faster and scoured clean the fraudulent past.

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