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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: morning in the city   morning in the city Icon_minitimeMarch 11th 2014, 6:07 am

Morning in the city
Through the half open curtains, day came
the world was silent and deep down there
into city caverns cars stood still but since it
had rained during the night pools of water
and diesel oil had made perfect rainbows.
A bus stopped, two women entered they
looked as low paid cleaners, yet modest
morning light made their unpainted faces
into works of art. The city yawned drank
coffee and began the bustle of commerce
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