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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: a maritime story   a maritime story Icon_minitimeNovember 25th 2013, 5:04 am

A Marine Story
It was an early evening on the Pacific sea, the skip was sailing
with ease towards San Francisco, the cook was clearing up
In the galley and the chief steward was down in the walk- in-
freezer making a list of food that was left and how much food
he needed when the ship birthed. The ship shock violently it
had struck a mine and the door into the meat freezer was stuck
and the ship was sinking. The cook knew where the chief was,
ran down to the store and was able to open the freezer door,
they grabbed life jacket each and jumped overboard.
Eerie silence they struggled to stay together, then the unholy
scream from the ship as it was swallowed by the voracious sea.
In front of them the raft used to paint the shipside, scrambled
on to it totally shocked and exhausted they fell asleep.
At dawn the chief couldn´t wake up the cook, an elderly man,
this had been too much for his heart. The chief knew what he
had to do, but waited till afternoon before he rolled the cook
overboard, curled up on the raft and closed his eyes, had seen
grey fins and didn´t want to witness his friend eaten by sharks.
The chief was picked by a passing liberty ship the day after and
three day later, he walked ashore in San Francisco.
A sliver of war´s agony, of no consequence, for its outcome of
the except for the man who had lost a friend.
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