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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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23/10 ten minutes two twelve when he will be 75, ten
minutes can take very long; he can get a stroke or a heart attack,
while waiting, he is standing up; few people die when standing up.
There was an English queen who when death was approaching,
refused to go to bed. For a week she was standing up in
a futile attempt to beat death....she lost 11 nil.
It is midnight and the twenty four of October. Ok, he made it, but
He must do this every year, living a month longer is important.
Or not! As a child a year took forever, now a year is a windblown leaf
scraping along a dreary road and fall comes around in record time.
Once a girl said she loved him, but that was 60 years ago it doesn’t
matter anymore, but he remembers it well and it is heart-warming
to know this, as a rain drop in a desert,
yet the drop was for him it fertilized his journey through
the domestic landscape of his tedious life.

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