Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.



 
PortalHomeGallerySearchLatest imagesRegisterLog in
Log in
Username:
Password:
Log in automatically: 
:: I forgot my password
Poll
Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
Overused
a nice view  Empty33%a nice view  Empty
 33% [ 1 ]
Underused
a nice view  Empty67%a nice view  Empty
 67% [ 2 ]
Total Votes : 3
Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

Latest topics
» Abduction to Elfland: Part 4 (19)
a nice view  Icon_minitimeAugust 14th 2020, 6:22 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 3 (13-18)
a nice view  Icon_minitimeAugust 9th 2020, 6:41 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 2 (7-12)
a nice view  Icon_minitimeJuly 10th 2020, 6:30 am by TerishD

» Abduction to Elfland: Part 1 (1-6)
a nice view  Icon_minitimeJune 10th 2020, 6:33 am by TerishD

» To Know Sweet and Sour - Part Seven (35 - Epi)
a nice view  Icon_minitimeMay 11th 2020, 6:38 am by TerishD

Top posters
oskar (2320)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
TerishD (1441)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
HYdraMStar (1170)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
Kellycakes (1136)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
Snacker (818)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
Urs (569)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
fleamailman (400)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
Leaka (334)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
JuJu (287)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 
alexandra (198)
a nice view  Emptya nice view  Voting_bar2a nice view  Empty 

 

 a nice view

Go down 
AuthorMessage
oskar

a nice view  Extrascribbler



Male
Number of posts : 2320
Age : 85
Location : portugal
Current Mood : a nice view  Th_coo10
Registration date : 2008-08-13

a nice view  Empty
PostSubject: a nice view    a nice view  Icon_minitimeAugust 26th 2013, 9:35 am

A Nice View

My shed is full of stuff I´m not using and
should, when get around to it, throw on
a skip. In the corner there is a golf bag
full of rusty clubs, a reminder of the days
when I genuinely tried to be middle class,
a family of mice live there now, their
entrance is a hole in the bottom of the bag.
They are safe there and probably snug.

On the left side of the bay in Cascais, there
used to be green slopes, now they are full
of buildings facing the sea. Everyone likes
to live where beauty is, nice view and green
slopes; they build houses there and roads.
Just more golf bags far from the greens...
Back to top Go down
 
a nice view
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: The Verses (Poet's Forum) :: Versification-
Jump to: