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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: end of dreams   end of dreams Icon_minitimeApril 15th 2013, 7:09 am

The End of Dreams.

It was going to be so good for you and me,
the future, less work, more leisure, more
equality and end of wars.

Now we have ended up vilifying the poor
bombing children in Afghanistan, and we
blame it on the pesky Taliban.

The poor kill their children because they
have too much time on their lazy hands
according to the politicians.

Hard working families is the new mantra
and if you haven´t got a job it is your fault
for not trying hard enough.

The future didn´t turn out the way we had
foreseen , war is all around us needs too,
we are back in the past´s despair.
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