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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Look Straight At Me   Look Straight At Me Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 3:48 am

Look straight at me!
Say you love me!
Say you need me!
Say you miss me!

Only together we can be happy
Two halves, once divided, now reunited
Let me take your hand
And never let go
We’ll go through hard times, together
Softly, weightless, light-hearted
We walk on hand in hand
You know exactly
That my heart will always be with you
Wherever you may walk

Come and look straight at me!
Say you love me!
Say you need me!
Say you miss me!
We’ll walk together
Through good and bad times
Reaching for the sun
Reaching for love, harmony and security
That is my desire
Love is like a never-ending fire
Come what may!
We shall never ever divide again
Take my hand and never let go
Let’s carry on together!

Come and look straight at me!
Say you love me!
Say you need me!
Say you miss me!
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PostSubject: Re: Look Straight At Me   Look Straight At Me Icon_minitimeJuly 19th 2008, 6:19 am

Great poem can feel the love you have inside,,,,,,
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