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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: My Number One   My Number One Icon_minitimeAugust 6th 2008, 3:24 pm

Notice: contains some erotic elements

You are my number one
You've always known you were
Even when you aren't my only one
You are the only one that matters

For your love I'd do all the clichés
I'd kill, I'd die, I'd slay the dragon
I'd tongue you, I'd fuck you, I'd cum in your face

Your body is my altar
It is your flesh that I worship
Your voice is my religion
No other goddess or god will ever come before you

Forever through this life shall I walk with you
Neither space nor time can part us truly
Death will only be a brief pause
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PostSubject: Re: My Number One   My Number One Icon_minitimeAugust 7th 2008, 9:59 am

I enjoyed reading this poem very much. Especially the play with the word "one" in the beginning. But somehow the third part is a bit too dark for my taste.
The rest is very romantic, though you did well by not making it sound too soft and unrealistic. Well done
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PostSubject: Re: My Number One   My Number One Icon_minitimeAugust 7th 2008, 12:19 pm

AliceInWonderland wrote:
But somehow the third part is a bit too dark for my taste.

Then my work here is done. Twisted Evil
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PostSubject: Re: My Number One   My Number One Icon_minitimeAugust 7th 2008, 12:59 pm

I loved it. Love poems should be uncensored and without restraints, just like that.
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PostSubject: Re: My Number One   My Number One Icon_minitimeAugust 10th 2008, 4:02 pm

What you have that a lot of poets do not is shock value. You say what you say without any doubt that it will go over well. If it doesn't go over well that is even more poetic than you initially thought. Very well written.
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PostSubject: Re: My Number One   My Number One Icon_minitimeAugust 11th 2008, 11:40 am

Wow nice Oo
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