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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Saphira

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Age : 35
Location : Münster, Germany
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PostSubject: Thoughts...   Thoughts... Icon_minitimeJuly 30th 2008, 12:46 pm

Since days
My nights lead my life
Bothering
With my inside

I lost something
I wanted to
Share my whole life

Not through mistakes
but through self-conscious
I'm just not
Mature enough

I wanted to have it forever
And not only
For a few years

I can't go
through the days
Think so much
Could also
kill myself

Can't talk no more
Can't live no more
Would forgive myself
The time

I can only forgive me
With the death
Then I'm free
From guilt

I fight
for new courage to face life
But I only
See black

Nothing is good anymore
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Location : Ringgold, Louisiana
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Registration date : 2008-07-21

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PostSubject: Reply   Thoughts... Icon_minitimeJuly 30th 2008, 1:32 pm

This is a really dark poem, Saphira, and I hope very much that it is not true. I do want to compliment you on conveying the emotion of the poem, although the sensation is also to cry out to you to not lose hope. I desire to simply say 'Well Done,' even as I feel a need yell for you to keep smiling.

Hopefully, the fact that I am giving you praise is enough to keep your spirits positive.
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PostSubject: Re: Thoughts...   Thoughts... Icon_minitimeJuly 30th 2008, 2:48 pm

Thank you TerishD
But i must say.. sometimes it is true
My life is not easy
I mean my life with my heart
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