Saphira
Number of posts : 124 Age : 35 Location : Münster, Germany Registration date : 2008-07-18
| Subject: Thoughts... July 30th 2008, 12:46 pm | |
| Since days My nights lead my life Bothering With my inside
I lost something I wanted to Share my whole life
Not through mistakes but through self-conscious I'm just not Mature enough
I wanted to have it forever And not only For a few years
I can't go through the days Think so much Could also kill myself
Can't talk no more Can't live no more Would forgive myself The time
I can only forgive me With the death Then I'm free From guilt
I fight for new courage to face life But I only See black
Nothing is good anymore | |
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TerishD
Number of posts : 1441 Age : 64 Location : Ringgold, Louisiana Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-21
| Subject: Reply July 30th 2008, 1:32 pm | |
| This is a really dark poem, Saphira, and I hope very much that it is not true. I do want to compliment you on conveying the emotion of the poem, although the sensation is also to cry out to you to not lose hope. I desire to simply say 'Well Done,' even as I feel a need yell for you to keep smiling.
Hopefully, the fact that I am giving you praise is enough to keep your spirits positive. | |
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Saphira
Number of posts : 124 Age : 35 Location : Münster, Germany Registration date : 2008-07-18
| Subject: Re: Thoughts... July 30th 2008, 2:48 pm | |
| Thank you TerishD But i must say.. sometimes it is true My life is not easy I mean my life with my heart | |
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