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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Feel, Listen and Believe   Feel, Listen and Believe Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 3:41 am

Lie in my arms
Feel how I hold you tight
In my arms you can be forever
In my arms you can feel secure

Look into my eyes
In my eyes you can read forever
And in my heart
That you'll always be the only one for me

Feel my touches
Feel how your hairs on your neck stand up
I will touch you forever
Cause you're the best that ever happens to me

Hear my voice
How I talk to you
Let me make you happy with saying:
I love you
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PostSubject: Re: Feel, Listen and Believe   Feel, Listen and Believe Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 11:14 pm

Yeah it sounds like you just want to get someone into bed. Just kidding. Its very beautiful. I think we need a songwriting forum because a lot of your pieces can be turned into a brilliant and beautiful song.
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