Snacker
Number of posts : 818 Age : 39 Location : Stuck in Michigan Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Feel, Listen and Believe July 18th 2008, 3:41 am | |
| Lie in my arms Feel how I hold you tight In my arms you can be forever In my arms you can feel secure
Look into my eyes In my eyes you can read forever And in my heart That you'll always be the only one for me
Feel my touches Feel how your hairs on your neck stand up I will touch you forever Cause you're the best that ever happens to me
Hear my voice How I talk to you Let me make you happy with saying: I love you | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Feel, Listen and Believe July 18th 2008, 11:14 pm | |
| Yeah it sounds like you just want to get someone into bed. Just kidding. Its very beautiful. I think we need a songwriting forum because a lot of your pieces can be turned into a brilliant and beautiful song. | |
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