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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: the date   the date Icon_minitimeNovember 19th 2010, 6:38 am

The Date.

It is midnight I was to meet her at nine under railways station’s clock.
I waited to eleven, something might have happened, the train delayed
(his was before mobile phones were invented,) I didn’t have her home
number. I walked along the docks where harbour light is forever throwing
itself into dark water. I threw the flowers I had bought her into the sea
and saw them sink slowly into the sea only the wrapping paper floats on
the surface of despair. I was seventeen it took great courage to invite her
out, this humiliation and she had such a sincere smile. Why couldn’t she
had said no in the first place? It was what I had expected her to do.
A fog horn blare in the distance, the world knows I have been stood up.
no escape if anyone asks I will have to play the clown, make a funny story
to hide my sorrow for not dating a girl I thought I loved.


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